I want to write about the pros and cons of the digital world and how we are affected by it.
Thesis: Digital media is effecting our society by drawing us away from reality, spoon feeding us everything and making us more ignorant.
Argument #1: Digital media pros and cons
Evidence: research articles, interview with strangers and family
Argument #2: Feed and what it is doing to our society
Evidence: feed the book, everything good is bad for you
Argument #3: Digitization then and now
Evidence: Brainstorm of the digital world, surveys, articles
Tuesday, November 3, 2009
(HW 16) Outline...
Posted by Sammie at 3:20 PM
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Sam,
I like your thesis. I think it's great! You clearly state your point and I know exactly what your paper is going to be about from reading it. I also think that the evidence you are deciding to use with help prove your arguments. I think it's helpful that you have various sources to refer to.
Sam...
Nice outline. its very structured, sounds like you are well prepared for your big paper. Your arguments are good but i think it might be a little more complicated then you realized to connect what those interviewed and your family members think about digital media to Feed and everything bad is good for you. But your also ahead of the game it seems so odds are you'll prove me wrong. Its very creative to use your own brainstormed thoughts as evidence, because it shows your in control of your own paper as this entire paper is based on our own self control and addictions to technology. Good luck on your paper.
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