(HW 19) "BIG" paper suggestions...

Larche,

POV: 3.5
EV:2.5
EO:2.5
SIG & CON 3
OPV 3
COM.WRITTEN: 3
OVERALL GRADE: 17.5/24

Overall I think you know exactly what you are talking about and how the media affects us and consumes us. Great hooks to get the reader wondering about what ads they see or what they purchase. Good rough draft :)

Michelle,

POV: 3.5
EV:3
EO:2.5
SIG & CON: 2.5
OPV:?
COM. WRITTEN:3
OVERALL GRADE: 14.5

Good start you need to add a little more and expand your thoughts I know you defiently have more on your mind. Remember to check the rubric and make sure you added as much as possible. Overall good start! :D